The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the UK from 1997 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph
illustrate
the percentage of Change the verb form
illustrates
the
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families
has different kinds of technology
in UK
from 1997 to 2001.
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the UK
Overall
. The
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Families
families
has
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the
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the
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technology
are
a huge increase in these years.
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In
1997 to 1998, the Internet, Computer and CD Change preposition
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player
were popular in the
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UK
families
. The internet was increased from 10% to 20%, the Computer from 40% to 45% and the CD Player
from 60% to 70%. But the families
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number of families
has
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have
player
was Fix the agreement mistake
players
reduce
from 25% to 15%. And in 1998 the percentage of Wrong verb form
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the
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families
with telephone
was Correct article usage
a telephone
same
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the same
to
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the
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families
, the
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the
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technology
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increased
from 1998 to 2001. Most Replace the word
increase
the
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families
has
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have
Player
, Internet, Computer and Telephone respective
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families
has
the CD Change the verb form
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player
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1998 to 1999. And there Change the article
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to
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of
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from 1999 to 2001.
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Therefore
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technology
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, technology, uk, player with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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