Being able to purchase goods from any places in the planet has made nations around the world become almost identical. Do you think this is a possitive or negative development?

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In recent days, we are able to purchase goods of any type from any country easily, and

this

has improved the knowledge of

people

about different food practices and cultures. I think

this

is certainly a positive development because we will eventually develop a broader mindset through which we can attain unity in diversity.

Firstly

, as mentioned I agree that easy access and affordability make

people

's lives easier, and they will get awareness about different foods and cultures. Owing to

this

, the tourism industry will

also

develop, and in ,addition more and more

people

will understand the value of diversity in our world.

For example

, currently

due to

migration in India, Indian products and households are available for easy purchase in most abroad countries, and

due to

this

, many know about Indian culture and

this

exposure has led most societies to cherish their values and welcome them for many other opportunities.

Secondly

, not only it can be beneficial for global unity, but it can

also

be useful for common

people

's lives as more options will be available for them to choose from. They will get to experience rare exotic fruits and vegetables, and in most countries where technology has not improved, they can buy imported goods from developing nations which can be very useful for their daily activities.

For example

, advanced tech devices

such

as Apple laptops, and some smartphones are easily available for purchase all around the world, and

this

has improved the daily lives of

people

to a greater extent. In conclusion,

although

wider access to all types of goods eradicated native values, it has brought significant change in the public's minds towards accepting different cultures and their values. Often big changes happen through small improvements, so

this

change will only improve our global market and

hence

it is certainly a positive development.

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