Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion,others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, roads are more common than
train
or
subway
lines
in most of the countries. Almost every household will own and use a car to travel around the
city
than taking the
subway
. But, some people prefer taking the
subway
as driving
increase
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costs and causes fatigue. In
this
discussion, we will take a look at whether
government
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the government
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should spend money on building
train
and
subway
lines
to reduce
congestion
or building more and wider roads to reduce
traffic
congestion
.
To begin
the topic,
government
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the government
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spending more money on building
train
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trains
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and
subway
lines
will definitely solve the
congestion
problem on both
subway
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the subway
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and
road
.
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,
as
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many existing drivers
starts
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to take
train
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trains
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or
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the subway
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subway
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subways
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as a means of
commute
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to work
due to
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the fact that trains and subways are more punctual and frequent will help with reducing vehicles on the
road
.
Next,
government
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the government
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building more and wider roads will
also
be a good way to reduce
traffic
congestion
by diverting congested
point
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points
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to
another
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another
road
and
increase
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the capacity of cars on the
road
.
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, cars from
city
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A and
City
B
are
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trying to take the same highway or exit to enter
City
C will definitely cause heavy
traffic
congestion
,
therefore
,
by
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building more and wider
road
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roads
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in either
City
A or
City
B will help with
traffic
congestion
towards
City
C. In my opinion, building more
train
and
subway
lines
will be a better option to solve both
subway
congestion
and
traffic
congestion
. To give an idea, having people taking the
subway
to their destination and
then
taking public
transports
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transport
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to reach places that trains could not reach will reduce vehicles on the
road
and at the same time the air and sound pollution will
also
reduce drastically.
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