You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures indicate the proportion of the 4 categories of lawbreaking and how many
crimes
happened in different ages in the United Kingdom in the
last
year.
According to
the charts, almost all cases were done by a particular age group in a particular type. The highest number of illegal acts were done by
people
who were 20
years
old at 80,000.
People
who were 16
years
old were the second largest and those who were 24
years
old were third at 70,000 and 60,000, respectively.
In addition
,
people
started to do
crimes
from the age of 12 who recorded the smallest number of
crimes
and by 64
years
old continued to do
crimes
. The crime number gradually decreased from young
people
to old
people
. In types of crime, the highest proportion was violent
crimes
at 46%. Property
crimes
were second at 23% and drug
crimes
were third at 22%. The lowest per cent was for public order crime at 9%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crimes, people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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