The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of different types of industry which developed Turkey's economy between 2000 and 2016.

It is clear that

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there was an upward tendency in 3 of the industries in Turkey, except for agriculture, government

together with

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leisure and hospitality, which witnessed a decrease during the observed period. As can be seen, in 2000, agriculture was recorded to be at the top of the list with nearly a quarter.

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, it dropped considerably to 14% in the next 6 years.

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, the pastime and hospitality were cut slightly from 17% to 14%. It was

also

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the same for the government as it experienced a fall to 9% in 2006 after standing at 12% in 2000. Regarding other features,

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construction

along with

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finance, business and other took up just a small fraction at

first,

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those climbed to 10% and 8% respectively over the following years.

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while

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manufacturing

as well as

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trade, utilities and transportation

similarly

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saw a modest rise throughout the time, the figure for healthcare and education remained stable at 17%.

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The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professional, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training . Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both there views and give your own opinion.

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Recycling is now an essential measure: it is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?