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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History

#people #history #school #subjects #world #science #technology
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There are ongoing debates concerning the importance of three
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 some people believe that
history
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educational system, others argue that the digital era attaches more importance to since and
technology
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 than
history
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. On the one hand,
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history
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the history
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 lesson is essential for
students
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 as it takes many irreplaceable advantages. It is the only lesson which offers
students
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 an opportunity to look back on our culture.
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 a result, learners will acquire a full picture concerning its origin, development, and current situation.
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, learning
history
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 helps teenagers cultivate creative ability and critical thinking.
This
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 means that it can generate people's imagination through what has happened in the past.
For instance
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, a student with great historical
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 may be inspired by the process of how our
ancestor
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 invented pottery and
then
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 give a new way to manufacture tools with an unknown substance.
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,
students
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 can have
a
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fun when they learn
this
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 subject.
In other words
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,
history
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teacher
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teachers
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 usually tell
students
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 many
attracting
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 stories in order to
arise
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raise
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 their
interests
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interest
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 in the class. Without
history
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,
students
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 would lose
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 fun in school.
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, it is reasonable that
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 like science and
technology
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 are important for children since we are coming into a changing society.
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, the young generation's life deeply intertwines with new
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. Specifically, high-techs
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 as artificial intelligence, nanotechnology or ChatGPT are reshaping our daily life in a profound way, which necessitates the
technology
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 class in school.
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, a nature class promote
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 to establish an
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knowledge
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 network
on
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in
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 our world.
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, learning
weather
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about weather
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 and animal makes children know clearly how the ecosystem operates and what should they do to protect
environment
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the environment
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. What's more, it is essential for
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 to get
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 on
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subjects
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 concerning their employment after they
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 school.
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, enterprises universally prefer graduates who
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 a range of technological skills rather than
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those
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one
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 only has a degree. In conclusion, I believe both
History
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 and Science and
Technology
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 are essential for
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.
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, educational institutions ought to cultivate children's
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abilities
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 and enlarge their
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 in all these
subjects
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
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  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
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