The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a silkworm,
while
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another diagram shows the way of making
silk
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.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the five stages are starting from laying eggs and end with the full development of a mature moth. The five steps are starting with boiling the
cocoon
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and end with weaving the
silk
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. The first stage is when the moth lay its eggs on trees. The next step after ten days the silkworm to hatch from the egg the start eating mulberry leaves. At
this
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point, the time will move around four to six weeks silkworm will be something named
Silk
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thread. In the
last
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stage, it will take three to eight days which will be a
cocoon
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, and after sixteen days it becomes a moth. When it has fully grown it will start laying eggs again. Having completed all these steps the lifecycle will
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begin again.
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the
cocoon
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is used to make
silk
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cloth selected from the leaves.
This
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cocoon
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will be inside a pool full of water and boil it to make it easier to unwind the
silk
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to make a thread of around three hundred to nine hundred meters before the stages the threads will twist and put inside a pool to dye the end of the process the will weave the thread.
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