The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.

The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words
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The pie chart illustrates what Anthropology degree holders from one institution did after completing their study program.
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, the table represents the earnings of the anthropologists who are working after 5 years.
Overall
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, from the given data,
it is clear that
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the majority of the graduates opted for full-time work and the government sector provided the highest salary after 5 consecutive terms.
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, the least preferable destination by the anthropologists was part-time work plus postgrad study followed by full-time postgrad study and not known which was opted for by 8% and, 15% and 12% preferred part-time work and unemployed respectively.
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, the private companies offered $75,000 - 99,999 to 25% of employees
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10% were earning $25,000 - 49,999.
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, most of the workers got $50,000 - 74,999 in the same sector. Freelance consultants and the government sector offered $25,000 - 49,999 to 5% and $50,000 - 74,999 to 15%.
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, $100,000 was given to 40% by being consultants and the government gave the same amount to 50% of their workers in anthropology.
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