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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that a number of people believe that
students
 can study anything
according to
 their desire,
whereas
 others consider that pupils must study lessons that will be beneficial for them in subsequent
time
 ,
such
 as those, which
related
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 to science or technology. It is undeniable that university studies have become an essential part of our life.
However
, there is no absolute agreement on whether
students
 should learn more critical business or general. A commonly held belief is that university pupils should concentrate on more serious and significant subjects . As evidence of
this
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 they point to not
waste
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 your valuable
time
 on unnecessary things, which will not be useful in the future.
Furthermore
, by spending more
time
 on their major learnings, they may be more savvy and be engrossed by it. It could be explained by the fact that
students
 will have more leisure
time
 for relaxation, it will, undoubtedly, lead to
ameliorate
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 the state of their mental health and stress reduction.
On the other hand
, some people claim that
such
 subjects, as global competencies, self-knowledge , creative classes and many more are vital too.
For instance
, they may mention that
by
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studying , whatever
undergraduate
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like
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is like
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, can be a really good motivation for them and
impetus
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 for understanding and mind development about what they really want in
this
 life.
In addition
, they will not feel voltage and reluctance to go to university in order to
application
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 bothersome and stuffy subjects,
therefore
 over
time
 , they will stop going to study altogether and their academic validation will wane. In
conclusion
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 taking everything into account, I would argue that it has two sides, which
has
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 as beneficial,
adverse
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and adverse
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 consequences , whenever
students
 have their right
ti
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to
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 choose what they want or
studying
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study
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 more crucial ones,
owning
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owing
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 to the fact that only they are responsible for their future life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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