Write a letter to invite an English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter: Include some background about the film Explain why it might interest him/her Suggest arrangements for watching the film

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Dear Kaswa I am writing

this

letter to invite you to the premier of a recently released movie which not only showcases the history but

also

the cultural heritage of our country.The movie revolves around the crucial events that took place before independence and the challenges we faced after it. As you have a keen interest in the national background,

subsequently

,it would be a great opportunity to know more about the Pakistan Resolution and the events which played an imperative role in the establishment of an Islamic state.I opine you'll have a splendid experience and will be able to comprehend history more precisely. Since you are planning to visit me in the next month,it would be the prime time to relive the history and have an exhilarating experience.I will book the tickets before your arrival and

according to

your availability.I look forward to hearing from you about

this

thrilling idea. Best Regards Ahmad Hassan Nadeem

Submitted by kaswaahmed20 on Tue Jul 04 2023

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6 paragraphs

154 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to invite an English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter: Include some background about the film Explain why it might interest him/her Suggest arrangements for watching the film

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

the plants below show a public park when it first opend in 1920 and the same park today.

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.

Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

Every country should give its contribution by doing voluntary work in some developing country. Up to what extent do you agree or not?

some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languge. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.