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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph chart illustrates the proportion of the average of
goods
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 transported in the
UK
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 in the years 1972 to 2000 by four different methods of
transportations
Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
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. At a fleeting glance,
according to
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 the line chart mostly via road increased from 1974 to continues in 2000, 60 to 70
million
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goods
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 were transported in the
UK
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, Following the pipeline way in 1974 transported 5
million
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 but the average fluctuated from 1982 to 1994 around the average of 26
million
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,
while
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 22
million
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goods
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 transported in 2000. So, maximum use the way of the road of
UK
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 transport. Moving
further
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, Water and Rail both transported started in 1974 around 40
million
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 but after that highly changed in 2000.
Although
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, The way of rail decreases after 1978 to 1998 in
Uk
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.
Overall
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, In the line chart
maximum
Correct article usage
the maximum
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goods
Correct quantifier usage
number of goods
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 transported
Change preposition
by
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65
million
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 to 98
million
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 in 2000 by Road in
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UK
Correct article usage
the UK
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. But Rail transport day by day average down in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, uk, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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