The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the previous budget planned for regional government and
milions
of money spent in 10 years.
The most noticeable trend is that Rates Revenew Correct your spelling
millions
reain
the highest value and showed upward Correct your spelling
remain
retain
troughout
ten years Correct your spelling
throughout
while
Grants and subsidies contrasted with the flat line in the graph. Linking Words
Moreover
, User charges have Linking Words
been risen
constantly over one decade.Change to the active voice
risen
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