The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the previous budget planned for regional government and
milions
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millions
of money spent in 10 years. The most noticeable trend is that Rates Revenew
reain
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remain
retain
the highest value and showed upward
troughout
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throughout
ten years
while
Grants and subsidies contrasted with the flat line in the graph.
Moreover
, User charges have
been risen
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risen
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constantly over one decade.
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