You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The map illustrates the modifications of a study centre from 1985 to the current period.
Overall
, from the given data it is clear that
the population of the school increased drastically and the study area has more free space now.
Looking at the information in more detail, the parking place has been changed to a semi-circular shape and earlier it used to be a rectangular figure. The car park inside the campus has been eliminated and the playing fields were reduced to half.
Furthermore
, the pathway that used to end at the playing fields is terminated and the classroom area has been enlarged. A block of 3 storeys and two wings of the classroom is constructed at the southeast and southwest parts. Moreover
, a pool and fitness centre is also
added in the south region of campus.
In 1985, the school used to have a huge library but later it was renamed as a learning resources centre and a computer room was also
added in the same structure. On the other hand
, the office remained the same throughout these years.Submitted by undhadsmit5 on
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