Human activities have had a negative effect on plant and animal life all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it while others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Human activities
such
as operating factory and agriculture has
left a big Change the verb form
have
damaged
on plants and Replace the word
damage
animals
life on Change noun form
animals'
animal's
earth
. While
there are more countries and people
realised
Correct pronoun usage
who realised
this
fact and started to take action to fix the problem, however
many think it is too late to try and do something Add the comma(s)
,however
while
others believe there is still enough time
to heal the planet. In this
discussion
I will be talking about whether there is still Add a comma
,discussion
time
left or time
is running out to fix all problems Correct word choice
whether time
Correct pronoun usage
that arised
arised
from human activities.
Correct your spelling
arise
arising
To begin
, people
thinks
that Change the verb form
think
time
is running out to save the earth
from the negative impacts we have caused on earth
as natural disasters is more frequent compare
to before Wrong verb form
compared
where
global warming was not as obvious as currently. Correct word choice
when
For example
, wild fires
are more common Correct your spelling
wildfires
due to
climate change making the weather higher temperature than it used to be which eventually made the air polluted from bushfires. But, people
still do not have their priorities set right for such
negative
impact on Correct article usage
a negative
earth
leads to Capitalize word
Earth
disbelief
of many that the world is coming to an end and no one is able to save it.
Add an article
the disbelief
In contrast
, some people
still believe we have enough time
to completely save the planet from dying. Some organization
have already started to take the initiative in Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
eco friendly
business Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
plan
and joined the Fix the agreement mistake
plans
reduce
of carbon footprint projects. Replace the word
reduction
These
movement gave Correct determiner usage
This
people
hope that earth
will get better as Correct article usage
the earth
year
goes by and more Add an article
the year
people
and organization
participate in projects to help save the Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
earth
.
In my opinion, the earth
is getting worse by the years even with all the go green and carbon footprint projects available created by organizations, this
lead to me not believe we have enough time
to save the earth
instead
we are just buying ourselves a little bit more time
to try our best in saving the world. Nonetheless
, hope is what give
humans the drive to do something and achieve the impossible but it would be difficult and not impossible.Change the verb form
gives
Submitted by honzent99 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.