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The supplied pie chart above delineates the information about British emplyment pattern of both sex group in 1992

The supplied pie chart above delineates the information about British emplyment pattern of both sex group in 1992
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The supplied pie chart above delineates the information about
British
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the British
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emplyment
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employment
 pattern of both sex
group
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groups
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 in 1992.
Overall
, between males and
females
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,females
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 there is
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a substantially
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substantially
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substantial
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 difference in
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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 of workers who
included
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are included
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 in craft or similar and
also
 in clerical or related types of jobs.
Furthermore
,
it is clear that
self employed
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self-employed
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 men are considerably more than women.
For example
, about
one third
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one-third
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 of all women in Great Britain
in
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at
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 that time had
employed
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been employed
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 in clerical or related
works
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work
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,
while
 a modest 6
percent
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per cent
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 of men had jobs in
same
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the same
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 sphere. The diagram reveals that approximately every fourth man
do
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does
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 craft or similar types of work.
Whereas
, for
females
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,females
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 it was one of the less popular
sphere
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spheres
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. A mere 3
percent
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per cent
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 of women are occupied by craft or similar deeds. It is apparently seen that just over half of men had
deal
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to deal
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 with manual types of work. At the same time 69% of opposite sex group
ocuppied
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occupied
 by employers.
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