You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter - request time off - explain why you need to leave early - reassure him/her that your studies will not suffer

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Dear Mr smith I am writing

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in regard to informing you of taking time off from the semester .There is a family get-together organised to celebrate the 25th wedding anniversary of my parents in India. the anniversary is in next month October 20 ,2022.

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, I am requesting you to please grant me leave for 20 days. I am planning to leave London on 30 September. As I have to reach early to make arrangements for an anniversary celebration. As I am the eldest son in my family, the responsibilities of all arrangements will be on my shoulders.

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, I am assuring you that my studies won't suffer because of my leaves . I will be in touch with my classmates for topics covered during my leave.

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, if possible I will have an online session with professors for doubt clearing.

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, I will complete all assignments on time and post them for correction through mail services. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Jeff Donaldson

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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170 words

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You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter - request time off - explain why you need to leave early - reassure him/her that your studies will not suffer

Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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