The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The line graph displays the figure for a person that
eat
convenience Correct subject-verb agreement
eats
food
(grams per week
), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
, two kind
of junk Change to a plural noun
kinds
food
(hamburguer
, fish and tips) experienced an upward trend. Correct your spelling
hamburger
hamburgers
In contrast
, pizza has been decreasing in
15 years until it Change preposition
for
stated
a light increase.
Starting from 1970, Fish and Chips customers had started with less than a hundred eaters per Correct your spelling
started
week
reaching the pick
in 1990 with 5 hundred Correct your spelling
peak
of
Change preposition
apply
snack
per Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
week
. Moreover
, hamburger
had risen Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
steadly
Correct your spelling
steadily
25
to 300 Change preposition
by 25
meal
per Fix the agreement mistake
meals
week
in 20 years (1970 to 1990) and became after 193 the second choice for shoppers.
On the other hand
, pizza had a steady decline until 1985, even though followed by a light growth until 1990, going to
200 to approximately 220 pizzas per Change preposition
from
week
. Surprisingly pizza lost the first place of food
choices when became the last
option for fast food
.Submitted by suellend.cunha on
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