There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding the problems on
the
Correct article usage
apply
bus
line A36 in the last
six months. The Bus
line A36 is a vital route for the commuters in our city to cross the danube
. It is Change the capitalization
Danube
therefore
problematic to see that in the last
six months
the service has been declining. Add a comma
months,
Busses
have been late or have been skipped entirely. I myself, use the Bus
A36 daily to comute
to work. The constant late Correct your spelling
commute
busses
resulted in multiple late meetings with crucial clients. It has been noted by my boss and I have been reprimanded for my tardiness as unprofessional. While
I understand that there are unforseen
circumstances that are hard to plan for, as a public service your company has a duty to do better. I suggest shorter Correct your spelling
unforeseen
intervalls
for Correct your spelling
interviews
busses
to compansate
for either late Correct your spelling
compensate
busses
or skipped ones and and hiring more bus
drivers to service the influx of bus
drives
. Sincerely, Katharina WilfingeCorrect your spelling
drivers
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.