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Hello Andrey I am writing to apply
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on vacation
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days. Because I am working tired and
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with my family. But Alisa works for me.I am planning
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vacation to visit my motherland and
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with my family and parents. Unforchinetly I hope he will a take short vacation. Best wishes Sarvinoz
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