PROPOSITION: Sending criminals to prison is not an effective method of dealing with them. Education and job training should be used instead. PROMPT: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today with the rising technology

crime

ratio has

also

increased to a significant ratio. The

afforementioned

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aforementioned

statement says that criminals should not be sent to prison

instead

they should be given education and job training.

This

will be an effective measure

to

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our society. in

this

essay

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we will discuss both aspects

regarding

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the statement. First of all, if we go with the operative solution in my

opnion

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opinion

it will

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a lot

,

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because one goes for

crime

and theft only

due to

hunger and

complexities

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of life for which he

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and do not

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any solution

besides

crime

. If

this

measure came into

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may be the

crime

ratio can get

a

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fall.

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, the criminal goes to do

crime

if he

do

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not find a way to survive so if he is given

eduaction

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education

and job training he can find

way

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to live and survive.

this

can be an effective approach.

On the other

hand

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some are illiterate and do not

have

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take any effect and

keeps

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repeating their crimes because they get

additcted

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addicted

to

such

things.

In addition

, criminals who go extreme with their crimes like they can kill people for their benefit they should be sent to prison because if

this

did not so

then

murder will get so common and

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.

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i

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have seen in

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Karachi

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crime

is so common even they can kill innocents for their concerns. So

this

is not acceptable at all. In

conclusion

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i

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would say am agree with

this

aforementioned statement to some extent because it will give an upright effect

to

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crime

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the crime

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rate , but disagree

also

because some crimes are not acceptable at any cost so they should be prisoned for the sake of goodness.