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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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Some individuals say
history
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 is one
the
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of the
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 most necessary
school
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 topics. Other people believe that,in
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 world,
subjects
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 namely
science
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 and
technology
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 are more crucial than
History
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. In my perspective, teaching students
in
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about
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school
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history
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waste
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a waste
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 of time and money,
therefore
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curriculum
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 of
school
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 should focus
in
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on
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 valuable
subjects
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such
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Science
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 and
Technology
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. On the one hand, some think
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history
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 is one of the most important
school
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subjects
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. They think through studying the
histroy
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history
 we can learn from past mistakes.
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, we can learn the major causes of World War II in order to avoid
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this
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these
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wars
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war
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 from
occurred
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 in the
futures
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future
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, which
this
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 can
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 money and lives.
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, we can learn from the past the causes of environmental issues namely, global warming, climate change,
pollution
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and pollution
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 in order to mitigate
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this
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these
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 issues
if
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in
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future
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the future
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.
On the other hand
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, I would like to agree with those people who believe
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subjects
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 like
science
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 and
technology
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 are more substantial than
History
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.
To begin
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curriculum
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 of
school
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concentrat
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concentrate
 on
science
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 and
technology
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 than
history
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.
This
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 is because,
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most
of
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jobs require skills in
science
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 and
technology
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 and do not need knowledge about
history
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, which
these
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means teaching pupils
science
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 and
technology
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 can
makes
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 them
are
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more likely to get better jobs.
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,
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history
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do
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 not provide vital services to
scoiety
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society
.
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, If the
curriculum
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 of schools
focus
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focuses
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in
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on
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science
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 and
technology
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 can assist to increase the number of
porfessional
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professionals
 specific In useful fields namely, medicine, engineering,
physics
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and physics
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 in order to serve the community.
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, when the Covid-19 pandemic started the medical staff
such
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,
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dotorcs
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doctors
,
nurses
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and nurses
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 play a significant role to cure and protect us to get
this
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 virus.
To sum up
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, In my opinion, educating
history
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 in
school
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 is
waste
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a waste
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 of money as well
time
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as time
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,
thus
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 the
curriculum
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 of
school
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 should only focus
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science
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on science
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 and
sechnology
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technology
,
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because it
is have
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has
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 positive
impacts
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impact
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in
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on
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 individuals as well community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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