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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The pie chart presents the preference for different kinds of
books
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 borrowed and the line graph illustrates how many
books
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 were borrowed from 4 local libraries between June and September.
It is clear that
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 fiction was the subject taking up the largest percentage of all types of
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,
whereas
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 the opposite was true for Self-help.
Besides
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while
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 libraries in West Eaton and Church Mount witnessed an upward tendency in the number of
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 borrowed, the figure for Ryeslip decreased.
In addition
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, Sutton Wood saw a fluctuation throughout the months. As can be seen, fiction
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 were recorded to be at the top of the list with 43%, followed by 19% of biography. Science and history shared the same fraction, at 14%, compared to only 10% of self-help
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. 
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, about only 50
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 were borrowed from both Church Mount and West Eaton in the first month of the observed period,
then
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 the sum of those increased and reached 150
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 over the next 3 months.
By contrast
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, the library in Ryeslip experienced a significant drop to 175
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 in September after standing at 300 in June. The total of borrowed
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 in Sutton Wood was 250 at the beginning, yet it varied considerably before peaking at 300 at
last
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.
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