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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map shows the drawing of a University’s sports centre now ,and how it will improve in future .
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,it will extend the sports centre and add several facilities
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 it will remove outdoor courts in the direction east and west and build a big leisure
pool
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 for except reminder entry and gym in that same place. Noticeable in the north it will extend the gym ,in the east demolish the outdoor centre and build two rooms dance studio with add sports hall ,and in the end ,corridor it will construct changing room with leave reception and seating
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 increase the number of changing rooms after that build cafe in the south next entry . Following that in the west it will knock down, and outdoor courts replaced with a leisure
pool
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 before that next
pool
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 will add for shopping spots shop
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 changing room ,in ,turn the middle will be A skate changing room,
then
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  the reception and
pool
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 space 25m is still as was in past.
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