The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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graduates
thier
undergraduate degree course, the table Correct your spelling
their
also
shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work
after five years.
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of people
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of employes
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employees
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companies
counsultans
, Correct your spelling
consultants
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the Governmnet
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sector and Private companies Correct your spelling
government
earns
$75000-99999 and $100000 Change the verb form
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