You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter,  Complain about the situation  Say why this is a problem  And propose ways to reduce the noise  Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’  Do not write any addresses  Write at least 150 words

Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to you
due to
the problems caused by the restaurant
opened
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near our residence. Every night I’m trying to fall asleep by the sound of the crowds and
restaurants
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restaurant
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music, but
last
night was very hard. After a rough day at the university, I came to my home and the rest of the day my ears were hearing the same loud music and people’s noise. From
which
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I heard, the restaurant maintained a
late night
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late-night
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party, and that’s the reason why I couldn’t fall asleep at 3am. I came to a solution
of
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that problem,
that
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apply
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the restaurant should have a strict plan of work and its limit should be 12am.
Also
, it could be made a sound barrier which will reduce the restaurant’s noise to our residence. I truly believe my complaint will achieve its goal Yours faithfully.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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