some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Several

people

work

for similar organizations until retirement

while

other

people

think that it is adequate to

work

for separate

companies

.

i

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will explain my answer with examples and give my point of view which is best. first of all,

i

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would like to talk about the

people

who worked for the same institution,

people

who love to

work

for the same

company

and spend their life because they will get the benefits and other facilities and

also

they want to build a relationship like family in working space where they

work

and know all the

people

of the office they start their career with doing basic jobs in the office

then

afters years ago they will become a boss where he can know the weakness and strength of a firm and which

people

are superb for the country

i

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will give

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example.

for instance

, they will know why the

company

is going to hell and what is the solution for

this

because they went through

this

situation before when they started working with the

company

.

on the other hand

.

people

who admire getting

experience

in their field to effort with individual

companies

due to

the perfect opportunity.

However

,

people

not only

work

for

experience

they

also

work

for a greater future life where you can

work

for enormous institutions you can get lifetime relaxation financially in a future life

due to

the bulk of salary and position that you will get by

experience

and research skills which you will learn through working with the dissimilar firm. for ,example a plethora of communities who are rich are working with branded

companies

and will become a master in

experience

and skills which you can't get working with the same

company

like a German philosopher who worked with 7

companies

and

then

he obtained a job in world's best famous firms. conclusion in my

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community who perform with another group individually will grow quickly and learn perfect skills which lead to securing a world-leading institution

on the other hand

folk who are stuck with one association will know the working environment well and they can obtain

a benefits

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and

experience

of the party and

also

build stronger relations with colleagues. in my ,view

i

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will go with

people

who endeavour with dissimilar societies.