You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir or Madam,

This

is Mahsa Hassani the manager of Lily Pet Food company

who

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held a reunion in your conference room on May 21st.

First,

I would like to appreciate the amazing service we received and

also

the high-quality

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the

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sound system. Our participants were

mesmorized

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mesmerised

not only by the beautiful design of your hotel but

also

by the lovely rose pots in the backyard.

Not to mention

that everyone was quite satisfied with the professional staff you have.

However

, many complaints raised to me regarding the food quality. Unfortunately, some of our employees were hospitalized

due to

food poisoning and others went through a terrible stomachache. I believe that was the chicken since it was a bit stinky and hard to chew. I think applying some extra supervision

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the kitchen, and the methods of cooking is vital as it can cause serious problems.

Moreover

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cheking

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checking

the ingredients regularly to make sure they are fresh is fundamental. Again thank you so much for everything being provided and the nice experience. regards Mahsa