In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience
Cities worldwide are tackling the challenge of busy roads caused by traffic jams. Both the
Government
and the community play a major role in eliminating Use synonyms
this
issue. Some of the solutions are, Linking Words
first,
improving public transport services and Linking Words
secondly
, increasing tax on automobiles.
Today, nearly 9 in 10 Linking Words
people
own a car and drive to work. Use synonyms
Hence
, the number of vehicles in main towns all over the world is experiencing traffic problems. Linking Words
This
is because many Linking Words
people
have poor bus or train services in their areas. To solve Use synonyms
this
puzzle, the Linking Words
government
must improve the frequency of Use synonyms
busses
to and from the CBD. Correct your spelling
buses
For example
, Linking Words
instead
of the trains running every half an hour gaps, the Linking Words
government
should impose a rule that Use synonyms
people
can only wait for 10 minutes for the next train. Use synonyms
This
way, more and more Linking Words
people
will be encouraged to travel by trains or buses rather than driving their own Use synonyms
cars
.
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Secondly
, the Linking Words
government
could impose a high tax on Use synonyms
cars
. Those who choose to use their Use synonyms
cars
for personal use and commuting should be required to pay tolls and taxes every time there on the road. Use synonyms
As a result
, most Linking Words
people
will avoid owning a car and stick to other modes of commuting. To illustrate Use synonyms
this
, public transport fares can be reduced to as low as $3 dollars to invite more Linking Words
people
. Use synonyms
This
is another best way to control the number of Linking Words
cars
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,
because residents will decide Remove the comma
apply
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buy Add the particle
tonot
cars
because using the bus is cheaper.
In conclusion, the major problem of traffic jams being experienced around the world is caused by an increase Use synonyms
of
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in
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cars
that families own. Correct article usage
the cars
However
, two solutions have been suggested to minimise the problem. These are, making public transport better and increasing taxes on Linking Words
cars
.Use synonyms
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