The graphs below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The given line chart demonstrates the
amount
of travellers Change the quantifier
number
traveling
a specific Caribbean Change the spelling
travelling
isle
from 2010 to 2017.
Replace the word
island
Overall
, it could be clearly seen that the total number of visitors Linking Words
was
sharply increased during Unnecessary verb
apply
this
period. Linking Words
On the other hand
, apparently, the visitors who used the cruise ship for the Linking Words
accomodation
have gradually grown with little fluctuations Correct your spelling
accommodation
while
other Linking Words
category
showed Fix the agreement mistake
categories
a changing patters
.
Looking at Correct the article-noun agreement
changing patters
a changing patter
Linking Words
this
details, during Correct determiner usage
these
this
period, Linking Words
,
the total number of backpackers Change the punctuation
apply
have
rose from 1 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
. It was a considerable increment. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
according to
these details, Linking Words
although
between 2010 to 2011 it displayed a little Linking Words
iimprovement
of the cruise Correct your spelling
improvement
ships
lovers in the Caribbean Change the noun form
ship
isle
, but again it Replace the word
island
has
fell back in 2012. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, from 2012 to 2017, the Linking Words
amount
of travellers, who utilised Change the quantifier
number
the
Cruise ships as Correct article usage
apply
the
shelter, have grown considerably compared with Correct article usage
apply
other category
from 0.25 Change the wording
another category
other categories
million
to 2 Use synonyms
million
.
The other notable changing pattern Use synonyms
recorded
by vacationers who stayed Add a missing verb
was recorded
an
island. It is evident that Change preposition
on an
within
2011 to 2016, these trippers used slightly the islet more than Change preposition
from
other
two years. Correct article usage
the other
Besides
, It reached Linking Words
till
1.5 and it continued during Change preposition
apply
in
the next three years Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
such
Correct quantifier usage
apply
2013
, 2014 and 2015, but by 2016, it indicated Change preposition
as 2013
that
a little drop. Correct word choice
apply
Nonetheless
, by 2017, again it could be achieved the target of 1.5 Linking Words
millions
.
Change to singular
million
At the
considering Change preposition
The
the
all figures, we could conclude that during Remove the article
apply
this
contemporary period, Linking Words
visitors
population have significantly enhanced.Correct article usage
the visitors
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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