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The graphs below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graphs below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The given line chart demonstrates the
amount
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 of travellers
traveling
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travelling
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 a specific Caribbean
isle
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island
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 from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it could be clearly seen that the total number of visitors
was
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sharply increased during
this
 period.
On the other hand
, apparently, the visitors who used the cruise ship for the
accomodation
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accommodation
 have gradually grown with little fluctuations
while
 other
category
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 showed
a changing patters
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changing patters
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. Looking at
this
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 details, during
this
 period,
,
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the total number of backpackers
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rose from 1
million
 to 3.5
million
. It was a considerable increment.
Furthermore
,
according to
 these details,
although
 between 2010 to 2011 it displayed a little
iimprovement
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improvement
 of the cruise
ships
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 lovers in the Caribbean
isle
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, but again it
has
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fell back in 2012.
However
, from 2012 to 2017, the
amount
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 of travellers, who utilised
the
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Cruise ships as
the
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shelter, have grown considerably compared with
other category
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 from 0.25
million
 to 2
million
. The other notable changing pattern
recorded
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 by vacationers who stayed
an
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 island. It is evident that
within
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 2011 to 2016, these trippers used slightly the islet more than
other
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the other
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 two years.
Besides
, It reached
till
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1.5 and it continued during
in
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the next three years
such
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2013
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, 2014 and 2015, but by 2016, it indicated
that
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a little drop.
Nonetheless
, by 2017, again it could be achieved the target of 1.5
millions
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.
At the
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 considering
the
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all figures, we could conclude that during
this
 contemporary period,
visitors
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the visitors
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 population have significantly enhanced.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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