The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your job advertisement for a part-time canteen
cook
in your school. I am Mangesh Sharma. I have completed my hospitality from Mumbai University, working as a
cook
in a restaurant and I have 1 year of experience. I notice that your job description of yours requires someone who can
cook
healthy food and can promote a healthy option to the student. As I have 1 year of experience, in a local restaurant I can design a healthy food menu for the student so that they can be fit and active.
Moreover
, I
cook
for a sports club where all sports enthusiast people have dinner.
Additionally
, the menu option are very healthy which include salads, soup, and a vegan base diest. As
this
restaurant is operated in
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dinner service, I would like to take
this
opportunity to serve healthy food to the student, so that they will know the importance of the health in future.
Moreover
, I am new in the town so I need money to survive and
to
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grow and become the best chef.  I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mangesh Sharma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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