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Employers should give its staff at least four weeks ofholidays a year to make employees do better in their jobs.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The length of annual holidays varies in different companies and different countries. Some people think employers should provide their staff with at least four weeks of taking
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 every year.I believe
this
 policy can enhance job satisfaction and make them perform better in their jobs.
Firstly
, if people could have the opportunity to relax and rest, it can ultimately lead to better job performance. It is no secret that long working hours and work-related stress can do harm to people's physical and mental health.
Therefore
,taking regular time off is essential. Employees can spend the holiday travelling, doing physical exercise and staying with their family members. These activities help them feel more rested and energized. When returning to the office, they are expected to be more productive and engaged in working.
Moreover
, some employees, particularly those self-motivated ones, may take advantage of the holiday to attend training courses.
For instance
, in many professions, the pace is fast and the workload is heavy, leaving white collars little room for self-improvement.The four-week long holiday is a good opportunity to improve oneself with advanced knowledge and skills, making them feel more confident and better equipped to handle challenges and difficulties at work. Opponents may argue that holidays can disrupt daily routines and work habits, making it difficult for them to readapt to the working environment after the long break.
This
 is true to some extent.
However
,
this
 effect is temporary, and very soon the employees will adjust back to their work schedule with greater passion and efficiency. In conclusion, I agree that employers should offer their staff at least four weeks to have a good rest per year. Doing so can we not only improve
overall
 well-being but job satisfaction, leading to better performance in the workplace.
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