The pie graphs show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The pie chart displays the result of a survey of kids' activities. The first graph illustrates the cultural and free time activities that
boys
participate in whereas
the second
graph shows the activities in which girls
participate.
Overall
, computer games are mostly preferred by boys
than girls
while
reading is the favourite
for girls
apart from these both the genders have a wide variety of interests.
nearly a third of boys
spend more time on computer games which is the most favourite
activity
among male children with approximately one-quarter of boys
preferring basketball as the second
most favourite
while
17 per cent of boys
chose soccer as their third most preferred game and a small minority with 11,10 per cent spend on skateboarding ,listening to music.
roughly one-quarter of girls
spend more time dancing which is their favourite
activity
.In contrast
to the boy's preferences reading is chosen by 21 per cent which is the second
most favourite
for girl children. although
,among female children who play computer games is twice less than that of boys
(18%) this
activity
is third most popular on the girl's chart.a small portion(15) preferred netball as the second
least activity
and the least popular leisure is listening to music with a proportion of 10% equal to those on the first chart.Submitted by manoj.ysg1999 on
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