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immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons for immigration? What are the consequences of this immigration for the host country?

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Many believe that these days too people are moving across the border. The migration causes because of better earning opportunities and to avoid the fear of conflict or war, resulting in major economic and cultural pressure on the host country. There are main two reasons for immigration to other countries. Many times the locals left their country
due to
 safety.
For example
, during the war between the Taliban and Afghanistan, many people move to different nations in search of security. The second reason is
this
 movement occurs because of better job prospects with the hope of a good lifestyle. Like, today most youngsters travel to developed countries, rather than staying in developing or poor countries. Migration has both negative and positive impacts on the home country. The main negative effect is a financial burden. The host government is responsible to provide shelter, food and basic medical requirement to these people. In many cases, unemployment is
also
 a problem. Other countryman carries their own culture and moral.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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