You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include * Details about the meeting * The problem you face * What should be done

Dear Sir, I hope my letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter regarding the hard time, I had at the restaurant and the challenges I faced during and after the meeting. Unfortunately, I am so disappointed at

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frivolous attitude of your staff. First and Foremost, I booked an extravagant room for myself on call.

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, when I reached the hotel to claim my room, they showed uttermost ignorance by saying they did not receive any call.

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while

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meeting, the services provided by your people were outrageous. If that wasn’t enough, somebody misplaced my crucial documents,which I found later on but the incident was a source of great discomfort for me. I surmise you should not only work to enhance your services but

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pay meticulous attention towards the comfort of your visitors.

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, one can not suffer at your hand anymore. I hope you’ll look into my request. Yours faithfully, Kaswa Ahmad.

kaswaahmed20

Jul 8, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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