How do the two pie charts illustrate the proportion of industrial contribution of factors to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.?

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These two pie charts provide information about how finance in Turkey was affected by eight different sectors of industry in two years, 2000 and 2016.

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, it is noticeable that what were the highest and the lowest contributors in 2000, which were agriculture and construction, are not the same as the ones in 2016.

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, the general trend, that the departments follow, was to contribute in a more equal way.

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agriculture accounted for 24% of the Turkish economy in 2000, its effect dropped to 14% by 2016.

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, construction's proportion, which was only 3% in 2000 , almost tripled in the year 2016.

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healthcare and education facilities were able to contribute at the same level in both years (17%). Both trades, utilities and transportation, and manufacturing were involved more increasingly in 2016 (16% and 12%, respectively) than in 2000,

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leisure and hospitality, and government were at their highest proportion in 2000, contributing 29% of the country's economy, combined.

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How do the two pie charts illustrate the proportion of industrial contribution of factors to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.?

Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children ,while other disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: •What class are you taking? •How do you like it? •How long will you take the classes?

Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops, why do you think this is happening?is this a positive or negative trend

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.