some people believe that universities should only offer places to students with high marks others believe that people of all ages should be allowed even if they do not do well in school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Education is a critical component of human development, many say that universities only allow peers with a good percentage
whereas
others think that all individuals have an equal right to study so it should be open for everyone even if one has a low grade. I will discuss both views but I am in favor of everyone should get a chance to prove himself
while
studying in university.
To begin
with, it's the right of every studious student to pay attention and focus fully on school studies.
Although
, the university level needs a huge level of intelligence and high concentration which is relatable for the brilliant students only. In
this
way, the morale of the children with low
caliber
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down and they went into severe depression.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • merit-based
  • competitive environment
  • academic standards
  • innovation
  • diversity
  • mature students
  • equitable
  • inclusive admission policies
  • educational disadvantages
  • holistic admission process
  • extracurricular achievements
  • non-traditional students
  • equal opportunities
  • societal progress
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