You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.
Dear Mr Tompson.
I am writing
this
letter to inquire about your time to teach me French.
I am going to learn French. But my friend who is your neighbor
can clearly speak. My friend told me about you. His name is John. And he said that Change the spelling
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the teacher
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with
me. I knew Change preposition
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about
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Then
I was very happy. After our conversation
he Add a comma
conversation,
share
your address with me.
My aim Change the verb form
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learning French is Change preposition
in
studying
in Paris. And next year I will finish school. So I have to learn quickly. If I can not speak Change the verb form
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in
French, I will not go to study Change preposition
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to
France.
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view
you can teach me. You are Add a comma
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only
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other
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every time. Can you help me? I look forward to your response to my opinion.
Yours sincerely. Jane.Change preposition
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Make sure to clearly separate each main idea into distinct paragraphs to enhance readability.
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Provide more specific details about the help you are seeking to improve clarity.
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Polite and respectful tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Proper use of greeting and closing statements.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite