The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six area of the world.
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the proportion of Correct your spelling
illustrates
illustrate
water
usage for 3 different reasons(agriculture, industrial and domestic) in 6 differents
countries .
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different
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that , Aferica, Correct your spelling
central
centeral
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central
Asia
and South East Asia
vast amount
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amounts
water
for agriculture
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agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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whereas
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North America and Europe used most of their Correct your spelling
whereas
water
for industrial work
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Africa
centeral
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central
Asia
and South East Asia
provided above 80% of water
for agriculture
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agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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North America and Europe used below 16%,however
these two countries increased their consumption Add a comma
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industrial work and supplied more than a quarter to factories.
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, household water
usages
remained under 20% in Europe and North and South America, Fix the agreement mistake
usage
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in other three nation
utilized less Fix the agreement mistake
nations
water
for domestics
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domestic
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