The two pie charts display the conclusion of leisure and cultural activities as preferred by boys and girls
The two pie charts display the conclusion of leisure and cultural activities as preferred by
boys
and girls
. Overall
, there was equal
percentage Correct article usage
an equal
Change preposition
of participated
participated
in music between Replace the word
participation
boys
and girls
, at 10%. Additionally
, two
genders were relatively similar in skateboarding and gymnastics, both represented 11%.
Correct article usage
the two
At
the first chart, Change preposition
In
boys
spent most
time Add an article
the most
on
playing computer Change preposition
apply
game
, Fix the agreement mistake
games
accounted
for 34%. Wrong verb form
accounting
This
is followed by basketball with 26% of the total time of boys
. Soccer, which was the second followed to least preferred activity
, allocated 17% of the participation rate, while
there was only 2 % boys
interested in reading.
For the second chart, Change preposition
of boys
it is clear that
dancing was the most popular activity
among girls
, representing 27%. Dissimilarly boys
, reading, which
was the second most preferred Correct pronoun usage
apply
activity
, at
Change preposition
with
21
% participation rate. The third most popular Correct article usage
a 21
activity
for girls
was computer games, allocated
16% Correct pronoun usage
which allocated
on
Change preposition
of
percentage
. And the Correct article usage
the percentage
lastest
Correct your spelling
latest
activity
was netball, accounting for 15%.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, activity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "display" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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