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The given tables illustrate the number of exchange students from Europe universities to Australian universities and vice versa in 2007 and 2009.

The given tables illustrate the number of exchange students from Europe universities to Australian universities and vice versa in 2007 and 2009.
The given tables illustrate the
number
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exchange
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students
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 from
Europe
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 universities to Australian universities and vice versa in 2007 and 2009. At first glance, it can be seen from the table that the total
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 in
Europe
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 to Australia was higher than those in Australia to
Europe
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 in 2007 and 2009.
Additionally
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, the figure for
exchange
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students
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 from Australia to
Europe
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 remained stable.y Regarding the first table, in 2007, the figure for
students
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 who were exchanged is the highest among countries in
Europe
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, at 61, it moderately declined to 60 in 2009. Recording in Germany, the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 in 2009 outnumbered the
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 of
exchange
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students
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 in 2007 by 2 times.
Besides
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 that, the Netherlands had a similar trend, at 36 for both years.
However
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,
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 other nations ascended, the United Kingdom declined from 31 to 25. The second table gives information about France having the most
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students
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 in 2007 and 2009, 37 and 58, corresponding. Germany
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 had a comparable growing trend with lower numbers ( 18 to 26).
On the other hand
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, Sweden, the United Kingdom, and the Netherlands witnessed a sharp decrease. In 2007, three countries just mentioned had
exchange
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students
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 (33,32, and 32, respectively). Over the following two years, these figures were recorded at 27,23, and 18 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, exchange, students, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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