The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the detail of citizens in
Australia
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and Malaysia for the years 1980 and 2002.
Overall
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, In
Australia
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and ,Malaysia the total population have been increased in 2002.
In contrast
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, people aged over 65 only have the highest rate of citizens. In regard to
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, their total population was increased by 5% hike as 19.6millions than a decade ago. They experienced a minor decrease in the birth rate to 1.3% in 2002.
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senior citizens in
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have good growth by 2002 with 12.4%. ,Meanwhile in both ,years male and female group was stable, with value of approximately 49.9% and 50.1%. In terms of Malaysia, the total people count had a substantial improvement with 24.3 million in 2002. Followed by people aged over 65 who had a 0.6 increase in percentage to 4.3% in 2002.
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in the male ,community it has a point level growth of 50.6% by the end of the period. ,
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Birth rate , Female group and average annual population have reduced slightly compared to 1980 with 2.2%, 49.4 and 2.1
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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