Many university students nowadays live away from home and their parents because of their university location,while others live with their families. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each situation?

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In today's topic, Most of the colleges are far away from students' locations, which makes them stay away from their family and hometown
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on the other ,side few people live with their
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. Let's see both pros and cons of
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situation. Looking at the advantages of
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statement. It benefits students in their personal development skills,
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as Socialism, Communication and Independence. Where they will learn a few life survival skills
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living away from family.
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, when a person stays alone without anyone to take care of at that period they will impulsively learn how to cook and do household chores . Apart from that they know how to budget their expense and
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get to experience different cultures and will be more self-reliant.
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, the major downside,
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People who live far away from their home experience homesickness
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whenever they see
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nurturing other kids they tend to remind their own families. Their stress level peaks at managing alone in a different country without support.
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people who stay with their
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can concentrate completely on their studies and other extracurricular activities. They
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have to worry about paying the house rent and other expenses,since they are financially secure. On the other
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they can't make decisions on their own, they will be dependent on others since they are guided by their
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from childhood. Sometimes, they do get nervous since they are monitored by their
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. In conclusion, students being away from their hometowns tend to learn many new skills and those who live with their
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have numerous benefits, but I believe that the advantages in
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situation is outweighing the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • personal growth
  • immersive
  • social networks
  • interpersonal skills
  • financial burden
  • psychological comfort
  • academic integration
  • loneliness
  • isolation
  • adapt
  • mental health
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