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The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 6200

The graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 6200
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of change in the number of students coming from other countries to study in Canada, in 2001 and 2006.
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, with the exception of Alberta ,where the percentage has decreased,all of the given countries have increased the number of students who study in Canadian provinces.The country with the highest percentage of students graduating from a Canadian University both in 2001 and 2006 was New Brunswick. Between 2001 and 2006 the land with the highest growth in student exchange was: in first place Britain Columbia , from nearly 5 per cent to over 10 per cent and , in second place New Brunswick from around 7 per cent to over 11. In the rest 4 countries the numbers approximately doubled. The only country that encountered a descendant trend in the number of scholars obtaining a diploma in Canada between 2001 and 2006 was Alberta .

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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