The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
households
in owned and rented houses in houses in England and Wales over 93 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
percentage
of families in owned
accommodation
showed dramatically increased,
while
the proportion of
households
in rented
accommodations
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accommodation
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showed sharply decreased.
Furthermore
, in the certain year of
households
in
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rented and owned have the same
percentage
. Looking at
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the
chart in more detail, in
the
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1918
households
in
rented
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the rented
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house was at the highest
percentage
at approximately 75%,
whereas
households
in
owned
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the owned
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house
was
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at
lowest
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the lowest
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percentage
at about 22%. From 1939 to 1953 the
households
in rented and owned
accommodation
showed unchanged
percentage
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percentages
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at around 68%,
32
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and 32
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% ,respectively. In
the
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1971 both
households
in rented and owned
accommodation
have the same
the
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percentage
have
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almost 50 per cent. In the next years the
percentage
of
households
in
rented
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the rented
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house showed decreased, but in 2011
is
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it
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showed
increase
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an increase
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.
In contrast
, from 1981 to 2011 the
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number of
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households
in owned
accommodation
showed raised, and in 2001 reached a peak at almost 69% and
retend
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pretend
rented
houses reach the lowest point at approximately 30%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, percentage, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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