The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets for last year and six years ago. summarise information and report main features, make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the Top 10 processed
food
export
markets
from the united states for last
year
and 6 years
ago.
It can be seen that overall
, the largest food
market was Canada with 13.2 billion
US dollars
last
year
and 9.3 billion
dollars
6years ago moreover
, the second highest food
export
market was the Rest of the world with 11.0 billion
US dollars
last
year
and 6.3 dollars
for 6 years
ago respectively.
On the other hand
, the remaining eight markets
Mexico
with income of 6.1 Add a missing verb
are Mexico
dollars
and 4.0 dollars
for last
year
and 6 years
ago respectively. The least food
export
markets
are Hong Kong and Australia with income 0.3 billion
US dollars
for 6 years
ago.
Compared to last
year
,6 years
ago US processed food
export
markets
drastically increased with income of 0.3 to 4.0 billion
US dollars
for 6 years
ago and the other countries also
raised for last
year
.Submitted by ksr.sandya on
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