Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter give the details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about my missing luggage which I accidentally left on the Monterey train during my travel.
I travelled from Monterey to Santa Clara
last
week, and the journey was about 8 hours. I was seated in seat 13 A, and I kept my luggage away from my seat due to
the reason that the space above my seat was occupied by someone else. Then
, when I get
down from the train, I forgot to pick up my luggage as I was in a hurry and I sadly realized that only after hiring a taxi.
Wrong verb form
got
Furthermore
, the bag was blue in colour with red strips, and it's a normal bag with wheels on one side, plus I did not have any important documents in there. But I had some expensive accessories like an Apple watch and a headset with some extra chargers. That being said, I would like to kindly request you to please check the respective space and inform me if I can come and collect the bag this
week.
Awaiting your positive response,
Yours faithfully,
Ana.Submitted by hemaecengineer on
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task response
Ensure to include specific details about the train trip and the luggage for clearer communication.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain consistent use of formal language throughout the letter and consider a more nuanced choice of vocabulary for a higher level of formality.