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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data shows the details of the underground
railway
system
 in terms of date opened,
kilometres
 of
route
, And
passengers
 per year in millions in
London
, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC,
Kyoto
 and Los Angeles.
Overall
, the first underground
railway
system
 was opened in
London
.
On the other hand
,
kilometres
 of
route
 and
passengers
 per year were minimum in
Kyoto
.
To begin
 with, the first underground
railway
system
 was opened in
London
 in 1863 with 394
kilometres
 of
route
, which was the longest
route
,
while
 the
Kyoto
 underground
railway
system
 had only 11
kilometres
 of
route
, which was opened in 1981. The underground
railway
system
 of Paris was founded in 1900, Tokyo in 1927, Washington DC in 1976, And Los Angeles
railway
 station found in 2001 with 199
kilometres
 of
route
, 155
kilometres
, 126
kilometres
 and 28
kilometres
 of the way, respectively.
On the other hand
, a large number of
passengers
 were seen in Tokyo (1927
million
),
while
least
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 in
Kyoto
 (45
million
). One thousand one hundred ninety-one
million
passengers
 from
London
, which was the second-highest number. Washington DC got the fourth position from the top in
case
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the case
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 of the number of travellers per year (144
million
) and 50
million
 travellers present in Los Angeles.
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