Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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,there has been a growing trend toward

technology

and

science

. Some people think that history is

one

of the

essentiat

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essential

curriculum school subjects.Meanwhile, others think that

Technology

and

science

issues are more crucial during the

last

decades.In my opinion, I totally agree with

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notion.I will explain both views in detail. On the

one

hand,

Technology

and

science

are the

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of

contemporary

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the contemporary

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world.

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reason behind that

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are more interested

about

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innovation

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of mobiles , devices,

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sophisticated

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space.

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,

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a country

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which

make

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investment

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an investment

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in

technology

and

science

from

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through

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education

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system,

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result

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a well

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well educated

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generation that

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develops

and increase the budget of

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the country

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.

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, In Germany is ranked

in

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third

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country

of

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development and economic growth.

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result

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.they educate their children from primary school about

technology

and

science

.

On the other hand

, history

is consider

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one

of

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subjects that reflect the

country

's culture and tradition.  For

instanec

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instance

, it will transmit the events and obstacles which are facing them.

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convey

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the heritage of our ancestors, which

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of

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an inspiration

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inspiration

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message that

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lessons for children about success,

honest

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and liberality. In conclusion,

although

history is a vital subject to learn our

yongster

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youngster

.

However

, included my opinion, the benefits of other subjects are more vast compared to

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.