The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.
This
chart depicts the amount of money that had been spent with
US dollars on books Change preposition
in
four
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in four
country
( Germany, Change to a plural noun
countries
France
, Italy, and Austria) in the years
between1995
and 2005.
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between 1995
Overall
, Germany showed the upmost
result all over these Correct your spelling
utmost
years
, while
the least amount of money were
spent Change the verb form
was
for
books in Austria; Change preposition
on
however
it saw Add a comma
,however
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a significantly
significantly
change till 2005.
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significant
Likewise
, France
and Italy illustrated steadily rising over 10 years
.
At the outset, in 1995 the greatest amount of money ( 80 million
dollars) was spent by Germany
people, Correct your spelling
German
as well as
this
index had
increased dramatically until 2005( almost 100 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
). Moreover
, in Austria
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,Austria
this
number was noted with the least point(30 million
), had risen a bit (approximately 10 million
) in 1991 and from 2001 it went up a
peak with 70 Change preposition
to a
million
over 4 years
.
Furthermore
, by spending close amounts in 1995, France
and Italy had climbed maximum till 70 million
(France
) and 60 million
(Italy).Submitted by shabnam.aghayeva on
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