The charts below show the propotions of British students at one University in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart depicts new Economics and
Philosophy
students
with
a variety of Change preposition
in
languages
in university
in the UK in 2016.
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number
of people speaking Spanish in
male Economic Change preposition
among
students
were
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was
at
43.6%, followed by Chinese at 24.2%. In terms of the Change preposition
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for Portuguese and French were similar at 14.0% and 12.7% respectively. Japanese accounted for the least number
of language
at 1.9% and the Fix the agreement mistake
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for other languages
occupied only 3.6% in
male Economic Change preposition
of
students
. With regards to female students
in Economics, there was approximately a
half of Correct article usage
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students
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the students
who
speak Spanish Correct pronoun usage
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at
46.7%. The Change preposition
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number
of French and Portuguese speakers
were
similar to male Correct subject-verb agreement
was
students
which were 16.2% and 12.4% respectively. However
, female students
have less
numbers of Chinese Change the quantifier
fewer
speakers
at 10.5%, while
the higher figure
for female students
with
Japanese at 6.6% than male Change preposition
in
students
and other languages
were
at 7.6%.
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philosophy
students
, the percentage of Greek, German, and Italian speakers
in male showed the
similarities which made up almost Correct article usage
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quarter
in each language (24.4%, 22.9%, and 21.4%).
Followed by Latin at 15.3%, French at 12.2%, and others at 3.8%.
Meanwhile, the proportion of German and Italian Correct article usage
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speakers
consisted at
32.4% and 30.2% Change preposition
of
in
female Change preposition
of
students
and the figure
for French and Greek speakers
accounted for less than a
half of these Correct article usage
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speakers
. There were the least numbers in Latin and other languages
in female philosophy
students
.
Overall
, the number
of new students
who have Spanish dominated in both genders in Economics, while
the figure
for philosophy
students
whom
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languages
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